Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Lỗi chính tả và ngữ pháp làm câu không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, dùng thì quá khứ đơn cho hành động đã xảy ra, và thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết ngắn để làm rõ. Tránh lặp từ và sửa phát âm/viết (bike, bought, was shy → likely meant 'child'). Ví dụ: "Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle and I used it to ride to my friend's house every weekend."

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle that I used to ride around the neighborhood every afternoon.

제안: Câu thiếu từ và cấu trúc, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Nên trả lời trực tiếp, dùng thì hiện tại hoàn thành hoặc thì hiện tại đơn để nói về xu hướng, và dùng liên từ (however, although) để so sánh. Thêm thông tin cụ thể (ví dụ: số liệu tương đối, lý do). Tránh tiếng lắp (uh). Ví dụ: "Bicycles have become more popular in recent years, but motorbikes are still the main mode of transport in my town because they are faster and more convenient."

예시: Bicycles have become more popular in recent years, especially for leisure and exercise, but in my town motorbikes remain the main mode of transport because they are faster and more practical for daily commuting.

× Yes, I have a buy when I have when I was shy.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The original sentence has multiple problems: incorrect word choice ('buy' instead of 'bike'), wrong tense consistency ('have' with 'was'), and unclear phrase 'when I was shy' which should be 'when I was a child'. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Suggestion: use past simple 'had' for possession in the past and replace incorrect words with the intended nouns; keep the time clause consistent: 'when I was a child'. ID:26

× In the last years I think it's but uh, in this town the motorbike is more popular.

✓ In recent years I think bicycles have been popular, but in this town motorbikes are more popular.

The original sentence mixes tenses and has missing words making it unclear. 'In the last years' should be 'In recent years' and the present perfect 'have been' is appropriate to describe a trend up to now. 'It's but uh' is unclear and needs restructuring. This is a present tense/tense consistency issue (ID 6). Suggestion: use 'have been' for trends over a period leading to the present and restructure the contrast with 'but'. ID:6