Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and relevant: answer the question in past tense, give a short topic sentence, then add one or two specific details (e.g., who gave it to you, how you used it). Keep it natural and avoid irrelevant phrases like asking the examiner a question. Use linking words if you add details.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was eight, and I used it to ride to school and play with my friends. Because it was lightweight, I could ride long distances without getting tired.

제안: Answer directly, use correct grammar and be more specific. Start with a clear topic sentence in present tense, then give supporting details and a reason or example. Use linking words (for example, because, since) and avoid incomplete phrases like 'in my'.

예시: Yes, absolutely — bicycles are very popular in my country. For example, many people use bikes for short commutes and errands because cities are crowded and cycling is cheap and convenient. As a result, you can see dedicated bike lanes and many bike-sharing schemes in urban areas.

× Yes, I have. How are you?

✓ Yes, I did. How are you?

The examiner asked about a past situation ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense. Saying 'I have' is present perfect and does not match the question's past time reference. Use the simple past 'I did' to indicate possession in the past. Suggestion: match the tense of your answer to the time indicated in the question (use 'did' for 'did you have').

× Yes, absolutely. It's very popular in my.

✓ Yes, absolutely. They're very popular in my country.

The question asks about 'bikes' (plural). The student used 'It's' (singular) and an incomplete phrase 'in my.' Correct subject-verb agreement requires a plural pronoun 'they're' or 'they are' for 'bikes.' Also add the noun 'country' after 'my.' Suggestion: use plural verb forms for plural subjects and complete the prepositional phrase (e.g., 'in my country').