Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a fuller response: start with a topic sentence answering directly, then add one or two specific details (where you got the bike, how often you used it, or a memory) using linking words to connect ideas. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 4–5 short sentences).

예시: Yes, I did — I had a red bicycle when I was about eight. I often rode it to the park near my house, usually with my older brother, so we spent a lot of time outdoors together. Because I used it almost every day, I learned to balance and became more confident riding in traffic.

제안: Make the answer more developed and grammatically correct: begin with a clear opinion, then support it with specific reasons and an example. Use linking words (for example, because, therefore) and correct verb forms. Aim for 2–4 sentences that give a reason and a short illustrative detail.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many children and adults use them for short trips and exercise. For example, when I was a child most of my playmates owned bicycles, so we frequently rode together to school or the playground.

× Yes, because during my childhood my playmates have their own bikes.

✓ Yes, because during my childhood my playmates had their own bikes.

The sentence describes a past time period ('during my childhood'), so the verb should be in the past tense. 'Have' is present tense and does not match the past time reference. Use 'had' to show possession in the past. Suggestion: use past tense verbs when referring to events or states that occurred in the past (e.g., 'When I was a child, we lived near the park').