Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clear and consistent about past tense, avoid repetition and filler sounds, and give a concise, coherent response (maximum 5 sentences). Start with a direct topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then add one or two specific supporting details (when, where, who with) using linking words. For example, correct tense: use past simple for childhood facts; replace fillers (uh) with brief pauses; avoid contradictory statements (saying you didn’t have a bike but then saying you did).

예시: No, I didn’t have my own bike when I was a child. However, I often rode my father’s bicycle in the park, and we usually went for three laps each day. Those rides were a happy part of my childhood and helped me learn to cycle well.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and then provide specific reasons with linking words. Remove fillers and avoid repeating the same point. Use relevant vocabulary (commute, traffic congestion, convenient, economical) and concise examples. Structure: state your opinion, give two brief reasons, and finish with a short example or comparison.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country. Firstly, they are a convenient way to commute because they help riders avoid heavy traffic. Secondly, they are economical and good for short trips around town. For example, many people use bikes to travel to nearby markets or schools instead of driving.

× Uh, no, when I was child, I don't have a bike, but I also have a bicycle, uh, which I drive daily in the park with my father and uh, I take 3 rounds a day of complete car.

✓ No. When I was a child, I didn't have a bike, but I do have a bicycle now, which I ride daily in the park with my father, and I complete three rounds a day.

Multiple problems: missing article before 'child' and incorrect tense/auxiliary usage. Use past simple 'didn't have' for possession in the past (Grammar Problem Type ID 5: Past tense issue) and present simple 'do have' for current possession (ID 6: Present tense issue). 'Drive' is incorrect for riding a bicycle; use 'ride' (ID 26: Sentence structure errors). Spell out numbers in formal speech and use 'complete three rounds' for clarity. Suggestions: add the article 'a' before 'child', use consistent past tense for past events and present tense for current facts, replace 'drive' with 'ride', and use commas to separate clauses. Also relevant issues: subject-verb agreement with 'I don't have' (ID 27) corrected to 'I didn't have' for past, and use of quantifier/numeric form adjusted (ID 14).

× Yes, in my country, bikes are very popular because it helps to uh save a lot of time uh, because if we travel uh into the into another vehicle uh stuck in the traffic, but bike is uh one of the vehicle, which saves a lot of time and uh we travel along.

✓ Yes, in my country bikes are very popular because they help save a lot of time. If we travel in another vehicle we can get stuck in traffic, but a bike is one of the vehicles that saves time and lets us move more easily.

Several errors: pronoun-verb agreement 'it helps' should be 'they help' because 'bikes' is plural (Grammar Problem Type ID 27: Subject-verb agreement errors). Incorrect preposition and phrasing 'travel into the into another vehicle' should be 'travel in another vehicle' (ID 11: Incorrect use of prepositions). Article use 'bike is one of the vehicle' needs 'a bike' and 'vehicles' plural (ID 22: Article errors and ID 1: Singular and plural issue). 'Which saves' should be 'that saves' or 'which save' matching plural noun; rephrase to 'that saves time' (ID 16: Incorrect conjunction/use of relative clause). 'We travel along' is unidiomatic; replaced with 'lets us move more easily' to convey intended meaning (ID 26: Sentence structure errors). Suggestions: match pronouns and verbs in number, use correct prepositions ('in' for vehicles), include articles where needed, and choose correct singular/plural nouns and clearer phrasing.