Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question and did not answer. In Part 1 you must reply directly with a clear topic sentence and 1–3 supporting details. Be natural and concise, use linking words when adding details, and keep answers under five sentences. For example, state whether you had a bike, give a brief detail (when or how often you rode it), and maybe a short reason or memory.

예시: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was seven and rode it to school almost every day. Because we lived close to school, cycling was quick and fun, and I still remember racing my friends on weekends.

제안: This answer responds directly and gives relevant reasons, but it could be improved with smoother language, one linking phrase, and a specific example. Avoid small grammatical issues (e.g., “those who can’t afford cars or are struggling to pay for other means of transportation”). Keep under five sentences and add a brief specific detail to strengthen the response.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, particularly among people who cannot afford cars or who prefer cheaper transport options. For instance, many students and workers cycle to save money and avoid traffic, and you often see informal repair shops in neighborhoods where cycling is common.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26) because the response should be a declarative sentence stating personal experience. Use past tense 'had' to match 'when you were a child.' Suggestion: answer directly with 'I had...' or 'No, I didn't have...' depending on truth.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country, especially for those who can't afford cars or struggling to pay for means of transportation. Bikes are very accessible.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country, especially for people who can't afford cars or who struggle to pay for other means of transportation. Bikes are very accessible.

Two issues: the phrase 'those who can't afford cars or struggling to pay' mixes structures; you need parallel clauses. This matches 'Incorrect use of pronouns' (ID 12) and sentence structure; the correction uses 'people' instead of 'those' for clarity and adds 'who' before 'struggle' to make the clause parallel and grammatically complete. Also added 'other' before 'means of transportation' for clarity. Suggestion: keep parallel structure with 'who + verb' and use consistent noun references like 'people' or 'those.'