Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammatical accuracy, fluency and clarity. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using correct tense and linking words. Avoid filler sounds (uh) and redundant phrases. For example, use simple past correctly (“I started riding when I was 12”), and add a brief detail about where or why you practiced to enrich the answer.

예시: Yes — I had a bike when I was a child. I started riding when I was 12, and I practiced every afternoon in the park until I felt confident. Because I loved biking, I often rode with my friends on weekends.

제안: Work on sentence structure, vocabulary and coherence. Start with a direct opinion sentence, then support it with a specific example and a linking phrase (e.g., “For example,” “As a result,”). Correct grammatical errors (“there are a lot of bicycles” → “there are many bicycles”; “no space” → “not enough space”). Avoid fillers and combine ideas into one or two concise sentences.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country. For example, the bike parking at my nearest station is always full, so there often isn’t enough space to park my bicycle.

× I started to riding a bicycle was when I was, uh, 12 years old.

✓ I started riding a bicycle when I was 12 years old.

The verb 'start' is followed by the gerund form without 'to' (start + -ing) or the infinitive with 'to' (start to + base verb), but not a combination. Also the clause had an extra 'was' which is unnecessary. Use 'I started riding' or 'I started to ride' and remove the extra 'was' to make the sentence grammatical and concise. Suggestion: Use 'started riding' or 'started to ride' and omit redundant words.

× I tried a lot to practicing the bicycle.

✓ I tried a lot to practice riding the bicycle.

The verb 'try' can be followed by an infinitive (try to do something) or a gerund when meaning 'attempt as an experiment' (try doing something). The original mixes 'tried' + 'to' + gerund, which is incorrect. Also 'practicing the bicycle' is awkward; use 'practice riding the bicycle' or 'practice with the bicycle.' Suggestion: Use 'tried a lot to practice riding' or 'practiced a lot riding the bicycle.'

× Uh, when I go to my nearest station they are a lot bicycles in the parking lots and there are no space to park my bicycle.

✓ Uh, when I go to my nearest station there are a lot of bicycles in the parking lot and there is no space to park my bicycle.

Several issues: 'they are a lot bicycles' has wrong word order and pronoun 'they' is unnecessary; correct structure is 'there are a lot of bicycles.' Also 'parking lots' (plural) changed to 'parking lot' to match context, but either plural or singular is acceptable; keep singular for clarity. 'there are no space' has subject-verb disagreement and missing article: use 'there is no space' (space is singular) or 'there is no room' or 'there are no spaces'. Suggestion: Use 'there are a lot of bicycles' and 'there is no space' or 'there are no spaces' depending on singular/plural intent.