Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: You repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a direct, concise response (topic sentence) and add one or two specific supporting details. Keep it natural, avoid repeating the question, and use linking words if you add details.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought me for my seventh birthday, and I used to ride it to school every day. Because the neighborhood was quiet, I felt safe practicing tricks with my friends.

제안: Again, you echoed the examiner instead of answering and made a grammar mistake (“our your”). Answer directly with an opinion, then support it with a specific reason or example using a linking word (e.g., “because,” “for example,” “however”). Keep the response within about 2–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short daily trips and exercise. For example, in cities you can see dedicated bike lanes and many students commuting to school by bike.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

No change needed. The sentence correctly uses the pronoun 'you' to refer to the listener, and grammar is correct. This does not match any listed error types to correct.

× Do you think bikes are popular in our your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The error is a redundant and incorrect combination of possessive pronouns 'our' and 'your'. Choose the appropriate pronoun for the speaker's perspective. In this question the examiner addresses the student about the student's country, so 'your' is correct. Remove 'our' to fix the sentence: 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?'.