Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: The student misunderstood the examiner's question and replied with another question. Answer directly and briefly: state whether you had a bike, then add one or two supporting details. Use correct tense and simple vocabulary. Keep it natural and under five sentences. For example, begin with a topic sentence (“Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.”) then add a reason or memory connected with it using a linking word like “because” or “so.”

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used it almost every day to ride to my friend’s house and to the park, because my parents thought it was a healthy way to spend time. It was a small blue bicycle with a basket, and I remember learning to ride it in our backyard.

제안: The answer attempts to respond but has grammar errors, vague phrasing, and awkward vocabulary. Give a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + brief reason), then support with two specific reasons using linking words such as “because” and “for example.” Use correct verbs and concise expressions. Keep to a maximum of five sentences and avoid redundancy.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for daily exercise and short trips. For example, commuters often ride bikes to avoid traffic, and some people collect vintage bicycles as a hobby. In recent years, bike-sharing programs have also made cycling more common in cities.

× Did you have a try when you were a child?

✓ Did you try it when you were a child?

This sentence has awkward structure and incorrect word choice. 'Have a try' is informal and often used with 'take' as 'have a try' is nonstandard in this context; the correct and natural form is 'try it.' The verb 'try' should be used without the auxiliary 'have' here. Suggestion: use 'Did you try it when you were a child?' to match the past tense question form and sound natural.

× Yeah, I think buying is really popular in my country because people need needs buy to train their health and also to move from another to another place or like about they indulge to collect a bike.

✓ Yeah, I think buying bikes is really popular in my country because people need to buy them to improve their health and also to travel from one place to another, and some people even enjoy collecting bikes.

This sentence contains multiple issues: incorrect word forms ('need needs buy'), missing infinitive marker ('need to buy'), incorrect or missing objects ('buy them' clarifies what is bought), incorrect preposition and phrasing ('from another to another place' should be 'from one place to another'), and awkward expression ('indulge to collect a bike' should be 'enjoy collecting bikes' or 'indulge in collecting bikes'). The corrected version fixes verb forms, pronouns, prepositions, and idiomatic expressions. Suggestions: use 'need to' + base verb, specify the object with a pronoun or noun, use 'from one place to another' for movement, and use 'enjoy collecting' or 'indulge in collecting' for hobby phrasing.