Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your response directly answers the question and gives background, but it contains slight unnatural phrasing and redundancy. Make sentences more natural and concise, use a clear topic sentence followed by one or two supporting details, and vary vocabulary (e.g., use "learn to ride" instead of "study riding"). Keep to under five sentences and use a linking word when adding details.

예시: Yes, I did. My parents encouraged me to learn to ride when I was in kindergarten, so they bought me a small bike with training wheels. I remember practicing in the courtyard until I felt confident enough to ride without help.

제안: Your answer states an opinion and gives reasons, which is good, but it is slightly wordy and contains grammatical errors (e.g., "most of the family" should be "most families"). Improve coherence with a linking word and add a specific example or contrast to strengthen your point. Aim for clearer sentence structure and varied vocabulary (e.g., "many people prefer cars or public transport").

예시: I don't think bikes are very popular in China. Many families own cars, and in major cities like Shanghai and Beijing, extensive subway networks make public transport more convenient. As a result, fewer people cycle for daily commuting, although biking is still common in smaller towns.

× because in China most of the family have their own cars and in some big cities such as Hangzhou, Shanghai and Beijing, the subways are all over the cities and people do not need to ride bikes.

✓ because in China most families have their own cars and in some big cities such as Hangzhou, Shanghai and Beijing the subways cover the cities, so people do not need to ride bikes.

The phrase 'most of the family' is incorrect for general plural reference; it should be 'most families' (singular vs plural issue). 'Subways are all over the cities' is awkward; use 'the subways cover the cities' or 'subways are widespread in those cities'. Also adding 'so' clarifies the result. Suggestion: use plural nouns for groups (families) and choose clearer verbs for distribution (cover, are widespread).

× My parents wanted me to study riding bikes when I was in kindergarten and then they bought me a bike.

✓ My parents wanted me to learn to ride a bike when I was in kindergarten, and then they bought me a bike.

The phrase 'study riding bikes' is unidiomatic; the correct construction is 'learn to ride a bike' or 'learn riding a bike'. 'Learn to ride' uses the infinitive after 'learn'. Also use singular 'a bike' when referring to the single item bought. Suggestion: use 'learn to + verb' for acquiring skills and match count (a bike).