Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clear with tense and sentence structure, give a direct topic sentence then 1–2 supporting details with linking words, avoid repetition. Use past tense consistently for childhood events, and include specific details (when, where, what kind of bike, who you rode with, one memory).

예시: Yes. I had a bicycle that my father gave me for my tenth birthday. I often rode it on long family outings with my parents, which made me feel relaxed and happy. For example, we used to cycle along the lakeside every Sunday, and I remember racing with my father until sunset.

제안: Give one clear, concise topic sentence, then support with 1–2 specific reasons or examples using linking words. Avoid unclear phrases and incorrect comparisons. Use appropriate vocabulary (e.g., motorcycles, cars, affordable, common) and correct grammar for comparisons.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For instance, many people commute by motorcycle or scooter in cities, while cars are more expensive and less common for daily travel.

× Yes I do have a bike my father give me on my birthday.

✓ Yes, I had a bike; my father gave it to me on my birthday.

The context is about childhood, so past tense should be used. 'do have' is present tense and should be 'had'. 'give' is present; the past form 'gave' is required. Also include 'it' as object after 'gave'. Use commas/semicolons to separate clauses for clarity.

× I used to drive with my parents long drive.

✓ I used to go on long drives with my parents.

The phrase 'used to' followed by base verb requires 'go' rather than 'drive' in this collocation; 'long drive' should be plural 'long drives' as habitual past actions. Using the -ing form correctly in 'going' is not required here; instead restructure to 'go on long drives'. Also place 'with my parents' after the verb for natural word order.

× I feel so relaxed and enjoy.

✓ I felt so relaxed and enjoyed it.

The sentence refers to past experiences, so verbs should be in past tense: 'felt' and 'enjoyed'. Also 'enjoy' needs an object ('it') or a gerund. Use 'enjoyed it' to clearly refer to the experience.

× I enjoy a lot during that time.

✓ I enjoyed it a lot during that time.

Maintain past tense 'enjoyed' for a past period. Place the adverb 'a lot' after the verb or after the object for correct English word order. Adding 'it' clarifies what was enjoyed.

× It is so memorable and I cannot forget till I was old.

✓ It was so memorable and I cannot forget it even now.

The event is past, so 'was' is appropriate for 'memorable'. The second clause mixes tenses and uses incorrect structure 'till I was old'. If the speaker means they still remember it, say 'I cannot forget it even now'. If they meant 'I could not forget it until I was old', different wording would be needed.

× Yes, absolutely. Bikes are very, very popular in our country.

✓ Yes, absolutely. Bikes are very, very popular in our country.

This sentence is correct; present simple is appropriate to describe a general truth. No correction needed.

× Almost all people have bike in their home in our country.

✓ Almost everyone has a bike in their home in our country.

Use 'everyone' or 'almost all people' with proper agreement and use the singular count noun 'a bike' or plural 'bikes'. 'Have bike' is incorrect; say 'has a bike' or 'have bikes'. 'Everyone has a bike' is more natural.

× Kara Kara's most expensive than bike by biker affordable everybody can afford in our country.

✓ Cars are more expensive than bikes, but some inexpensive models mean many people can still afford them in our country.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Kara Kara's' seems to mean 'cars'. Use comparative structure 'more expensive than'. Clarify the idea that although cars cost more, affordable models exist. Keep consistent plural forms and proper word order.

× So by car popular.

✓ So cars are less popular than bikes.

The fragment lacks a verb and clear comparison. To convey the intended meaning that cars are less common or popular, use a full sentence with subject and verb: 'cars are less popular than bikes'.