Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise, avoid repetition, and organise your answer with a clear topic sentence plus one or two supporting details. Use linking words (e.g., "so," "therefore," "because") to show cause and effect, and correct small grammar issues (e.g., "everyday" -> "every day").

예시: I didn't own a bike as a child, but I often borrowed a neighbour's. Because I practised on it every day, I quickly learned how to ride and became confident cycling on the streets.

제안: Make your answer more coherent and grammatical: start with a clear opinion sentence, then give two specific reasons with linking words. Remove hesitations and repetitions, and finish the thought (avoid trailing off). Use precise vocabulary (e.g., "tropical climate," "affordable," "convenient").

예시: Yes, I believe bikes are quite popular in my country. Firstly, the tropical climate allows people to cycle year-round, and secondly, bicycles are an affordable and convenient way to travel short distances in crowded cities.

× I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I used to borrow one of one of the neighborhood bikes and I got to use it and practice mostly everyday and that's how I got to know how to ride a bike.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I used to borrow one of the neighborhood bikes, and I got to use it and practice mostly every day; that's how I learned to ride a bike.

Multiple past-tense related issues: 'one of one of' is a repetition/typo; 'everyday' (adjective) should be two words 'every day' when meaning each day; 'got to know how to ride' is awkward and non-idiomatic in past context — use 'learned to ride'. Also add a comma and semicolon for clarity and correct clause connection. Suggestion: remove repeated words, use 'every day' for frequency, and use 'learned' for acquiring a skill in the past.

× I think bikes are popular in our country because it's Tropic, tropical climate here.

✓ I think bikes are popular in our country because we have a tropical climate here.

'It's Tropic, tropical climate here' is ungrammatical and misuses noun/adjective forms. Use 'we have a tropical climate' or 'it is tropical here'. 'Tropic' is a noun referring to regions; the adjective 'tropical' is correct. Suggestion: use the adjective 'tropical' and a correct clause structure: 'we have a tropical climate' or 'it is tropical here.'

× And I think people are usually prefer to use it as a as a mode of transportation because it's accessible and and efficient in some way because we.

✓ And I think people usually prefer to use them as a mode of transportation because they are accessible and efficient in some ways.

Pronoun and agreement errors: 'people are usually prefer' mixes auxiliary 'are' with main verb 'prefer' incorrectly — remove 'are'. 'Use it' incorrectly refers to 'bikes' (plural) so use 'them'. Duplicate 'as a as a' is a typo. 'It's accessible and and efficient' uses 'it's' (singular) and double 'and' — should be plural 'they are' or rephrase. The trailing 'because we.' is incomplete; remove or complete; here rephrased to 'because they are accessible and efficient in some ways.' Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement, match pronouns to nouns, remove duplicates, and complete clauses.