Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer repeats the examiner's question instead of responding. For a higher score, answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep your response natural, concise (max 5 sentences), and use appropriate vocabulary.

예시: Yes. I had a small red bicycle when I was about eight years old, and I learned to ride it in my neighborhood park. Because my parents lived close by, I often rode it to visit friends, which helped me become more confident and independent.

제안: The content is relevant and gives reasons, but the sentence is long and slightly awkward. Improve coherence by starting with a clear topic sentence, then use linking words (for example, because, moreover) and provide a specific example or brief comparison. Use more natural phrasing and correct small grammar issues (e.g., "they reduce" instead of "it does reduce"). Keep it under five sentences.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in the Philippines because they help reduce air pollution and are often faster than crowded public transport. For example, many commuters use bikes for short trips in cities, especially during peak hours, which saves time and money.

× Yes, here in the Philippines bikes are common and popular since it does reduce air pollution and gives us more ability to reach our destination way faster than common transportation.

✓ Yes, here in the Philippines bikes are common and popular because they reduce air pollution and allow us to reach our destinations much faster than common forms of transportation.

Errors involve incorrect verb agreement and awkward phrasing. 'does reduce' is unnecessary emphatic and mismatches plural subject 'bikes'; use 'they reduce' (present tense plural). 'gives us more ability to reach our destination way faster' is awkward and incorrect: 'gives' should be 'allow' to match plural subject and meaning, 'ability to reach our destination' is wordy and singular 'destination' should be plural 'destinations' to be general, and 'way faster' is informal; use 'much faster'. Also replace 'since' with 'because' for clearer causal connection. Suggestion: match plural subject with plural verbs, use concise verbs (reduce, allow), and prefer neutral adverbs like 'much'.