Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Expand your answer with a clear topic sentence plus 1–2 supporting details. Mention when you had the bike, who gave it to you or how you used it, and add a brief feeling or result. Use linking words like “and” or “so” to connect ideas. Keep it natural and within 3–5 short sentences.

예시: Yes, I did — I had a red bicycle when I was about eight years old. It was a gift from my parents, and I used it to ride to school and play with friends in the park. Because of that bike, I became more independent and spent a lot of time outdoors.

제안: Make the reply more natural and specific. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give reasons or examples (e.g., commuting, exercise, environment). Use linking words such as “because,” “for example,” or “also” to connect points. Avoid singular/plural mistakes (say “bikes” not “bike”). Keep to 2–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them to commute in crowded cities. For example, students and office workers often cycle short distances to save time and money, and recently more people cycle for exercise and leisure as well.

× Yes, I do think bike is popular in my country.

✓ Yes, I do think bikes are popular in my country.

The noun 'bike' should be plural ('bikes') to match the general statement about popularity of bicycles in the country. In English, when making general statements about countable nouns, use the plural form (e.g., 'cars are common', 'books are important'). Also adjust the verb to agree with the plural subject: 'bikes are' rather than 'bike is'. Suggestion: Use plural nouns for generalizations and ensure subject-verb agreement.