Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is too short and does not follow the Basic Structure rule. Give a direct topic sentence and then add one or two brief supporting details (why not, or a short memory) using linking words. Keep it natural and under five sentences.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school because my family lived nearby, and my parents preferred that I stayed close to home. As a result, I only learned to ride a bike much later, when I was a teenager.

제안: The answer is unclear and not coherent. Start with a clear opinion (yes/no or partly), then support it with specific reasons and linking words. Use relevant vocabulary (commute, environmentally friendly, traffic, cycling lanes) and keep sentences concise and logical.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people use them to commute short distances because they are cheap and convenient, and some cities have been building more cycling lanes to encourage this.

× Two of bikes are ****** around my country because I really feel like everything sounds like so many salary places and seasons anyway.

✓ Bikes are quite common in my country because I feel like many places and seasons make them useful.

The original sentence has multiple structural and word-choice problems that make it unintelligible. This falls under 'Sentence structure errors' (ID 26). Issues include an incorrect phrase 'Two of bikes', which is ungrammatical; misuse of 'are ******' leaving a missing adjective or verb; awkward and unclear clauses 'everything sounds like so many salary places and seasons' that do not convey a coherent meaning. The corrected sentence restores a clear subject and verb order, removes nonsensical fragments, and uses simple, direct language that fits the examiner's question and the present-tense general statement. Suggestion: state a clear subject ('Bikes'), use a suitable adjective or verb ('are quite common'), and give a concise reason using everyday vocabulary ('because many places and seasons make them useful').