Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct, coherent and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + brief detail), then add one or two specific supporting details using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect word order. Pay attention to tense consistency (past), articles (a/the), prepositions, and subject-verb agreement. Aim for 2–4 well-formed sentences.

예시: Yes. I had a bike when I was a child and I often rode it along a beautiful river near my home. I used to cycle there almost every weekend because the path was quiet and the scenery was relaxing. Those rides left a strong impression on me and made me enjoy outdoor activities.

제안: Give a clear direct answer and support it with specific facts or examples. Use linking words (for example, because, so) to make your points coherent. Avoid filler sounds and repeated words. Use accurate grammar: plural/singular forms, articles, and natural phrases (e.g., "popular activity"). Try two to three concise sentences.

예시: Yes, cycling is very popular in my country. For example, many people commute by bike in cities and communities organize weekend group rides, so it is both a common mode of transport and a leisure activity. Because it is cheap and healthy, most people enjoy riding regularly.

× Of course, when I was younger, I usually enjoyed riding a bike.

✓ Of course, when I was younger, I usually enjoyed riding a bike.

No change needed; sentence correctly uses past habitual (usually enjoyed) to describe a repeated action in the past. Keep past tense for childhood habits.

× There are beautiful river, but there was a beautiful river in my country.

✓ There was a beautiful river in my country.

The original mixes present 'There are' with singular 'river' and then repeats with past 'was'. Use 'There was' to show existence of a single river in the past. Recommendation: match singular/plural and tense: 'There was a beautiful river.'

× I usually go the this river and riding a bike among the river.

✓ I usually went to that river and rode my bike along the river.

Multiple preposition and verb form errors: 'go the this river' should be 'went to that river' (use past tense and correct article/demonstrative), 'riding a bike' should be past tense 'rode my bike', and 'among the river' is incorrect; use 'along the river' to indicate following the river's side. Suggestion: use correct prepositions (to, along) and consistent past tense.

× This experience was very impactful Me, I want to.

✓ This experience was very impactful to me; I really enjoyed it.

Original is ungrammatical: 'impactful Me, I want to' mixes fragments and wrong word order. Rephrase to 'impactful to me' and add a complete clause 'I really enjoyed it' to express intended meaning. Suggestion: form complete sentences and keep subject-verb structure.

× Of course, but riding a bike is very popular, popular activity in my country.

✓ Of course, riding a bike is a very popular activity in my country.

Redundant 'popular, popular' and article placement: use 'a very popular activity'. Maintain present tense to describe a general truth. Suggestion: avoid repetition and include the indefinite article before 'very popular activity'.

× Uh, in my country tend to play activity more activity one.

✓ In my country, people tend to do many different activities.

Original lacks a clear subject and uses incorrect word order and word choice. Insert subject 'people' and rephrase to 'tend to do many different activities' to convey meaning. Suggestion: ensure subject is present and use natural collocations (do activities).

× Uh, one of the most activity is riding a bike.

✓ One of the most popular activities is riding a bike.

Incorrect noun phrase 'most activity'; use 'one of the most popular activities' to compare among a set. Include plural 'activities' after 'most' and adjective 'popular'. Suggestion: use correct comparative structure: 'one of the most + adjective + plural noun'.

× Most, most people enjoy riding a bike.

✓ Most people enjoy riding bikes.

Redundant 'Most, most' should be a single 'Most'. Also 'riding a bike' can be pluralized as 'riding bikes' for a general statement. Maintain present simple for general truth. Suggestion: avoid repetition and use concise phrasing.

× They do this way.

✓ They do it that way.

Awkward phrasing: 'do this way' is incorrect. Use 'do it that way' or 'use that method' to refer to the manner. Suggestion: use object pronoun 'it' and appropriate demonstrative 'that' for clarity.