Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a direct response (yes/no) with a topic sentence, then add 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural, concise (max 5 sentences), and avoid filler words like “uh.”

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that I rode to my friend’s house every weekend, and it helped me learn balance and confidence. Because the streets were quiet in my neighborhood, I felt safe practicing, so I became comfortable cycling on busier roads later.

제안: The answer addresses the question and gives reasons, but contains repetition, hesitations, and some unclear phrasing. Improve coherence by using linking words (for example, because, therefore, so) and remove fillers. Be more specific (mention examples of where or who uses bikes) and use varied vocabulary (popular, convenient, practical). Keep within 3–4 clear sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because we have warm weather most of the year, which makes cycling comfortable. In cities, many people use bicycles for short trips since they are cheaper and avoid parking problems. For example, students and delivery workers often prefer bikes because they are fast and practical in traffic.

× Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because it has like a year around, uh, warm weather and it's easier to easier to move around the city when you have a bike, so you don't need the, uh, space for parking a car. So it, uh, if you have a bike in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because we have warm weather all year round, and it's easier to move around the city when you have a bike, so you don't need space to park a car.

Multiple problems: 'it has like a year around, uh, warm weather' uses incorrect subject and word order for time expression (Present tense issue and incorrect use of prepositions/time expressions). The correct phrasing is 'we have warm weather all year round' to match the plural subject 'bikes are popular in my country' and to use a natural English time expression. 'It's easier to easier to move' repeats 'easier' (sentence structure error) and should be 'it's easier to move'. 'space for parking a car' is acceptable but more natural is 'space to park a car'. Suggestion: use 'we have warm weather all year round', avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'like', remove repeated words, and use 'space to park a car' for natural phrasing.