Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a slightly longer, natural response that directly answers the question and adds one brief supporting detail. Use a topic sentence and one short reason or memory. Keep it under five sentences and use simple linking words if needed.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I usually walked to school because my parents preferred it for safety. However, I sometimes borrowed my friend’s bike to ride in the park.

제안: Rewrite the answer to be more grammatically correct, more concise, and use linking words to organize details. Provide one or two specific examples (where or how people use the bikes). Use varied vocabulary (public/shared bikes, docking, app, convenient) and limit to under five sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because there are many public shared bikes available on the streets. People can use a mobile app to scan a QR code and unlock a bike quickly, which makes short trips and commuting very convenient.

× Yes, because in my country is have many public bike on the street and the people can use their mobile phone to scan the QR code on the byte and they can unlock the bike and they can use it.

✓ Yes, because in my country there are many public bikes on the street, and people can use their mobile phones to scan the QR code on the bike to unlock it and use it.

Multiple errors fall under 'There be issue' and related categories: 'is have' is ungrammatical; the construction requires 'there are' for plural existence. Also singular/plural nouns and some word choice and redundancy were fixed. Specifically: use 'there are' to state existence of plural items; 'many public bikes' uses plural noun form; 'mobile phones' plural matches 'people'; 'byte' was a typo changed to 'bike'; reduce repetition by combining 'unlock it and use it.' Suggestion: practice using 'there is/there are' to express existence, ensure noun number agreement, and proofread for typos and redundant phrases.