Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

× My parents gave me the bicycle as my present on my 10th birthday party.

✓ My parents gave me a bicycle as a present on my 10th birthday.

Slight article and singular/plural usage: 'the bicycle' implies a specific bicycle previously mentioned; use 'a bicycle' for unspecified item. 'My present' -> 'a present' is more natural. Also 'birthday party' can be shortened to 'birthday'. Suggestion: use 'a' for non-specific nouns and simplify phrases for natural English.

× I used it to hang out with my friend and go to school.

✓ I used it to hang out with my friends and to go to school.

Parallel structure: when listing purposes introduced by 'to', keep the 'to' infinitive form for each verb. Also 'my friend' likely should be plural 'my friends' if hanging out with more than one; if singular, keep 'my friend' but maintain parallel infinitives: 'to hang out with my friend and to go to school.' Use consistent verb forms for clarity.

× Yes, I in my opinion in the past but school is most youthful in my country than nowadays because nowadays people often use mostly use multiple or car because.

✓ Yes, in my opinion bicycles were more common in the past in my country than they are nowadays because people now often use motorcycles or cars.

Multiple issues: word order and redundancy ('in my opinion in the past' is awkward and repetitive 'nowadays' and 'because' used incorrectly). Tense: compare past and present so use past tense 'were' and present 'are'. Vocabulary: 'most youthful' is incorrect—use 'more common'. 'Multiple or car' unclear—likely 'motorcycles or cars'. Remove repeated words and fix word order. Suggestion: state comparison clearly: 'bicycles were more common in the past than they are now because people often use motorcycles or cars.'