Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a fuller but concise response: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details (e.g., who gave it to you, how you used it, memorable experience). Use a linking word if adding details. Keep it natural and under five sentences.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a bright red bike that my parents gave me for my eighth birthday, and I rode it every day around the neighborhood. Because it had training wheels at first, I felt safe learning fast and later enjoyed cycling to the park with friends.

제안: Make the answer more specific and varied: begin with a direct statement, then add specific reasons or examples and a linking word to connect ideas. Mention who uses bikes, where they are used, or a brief comparison to other transport to show deeper development.

예시: Yes, I believe bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many students and office workers commute by bicycle because it is cheaper and faster in crowded cities, and there are growing bike lanes that make cycling safer compared with taking a car.

× Yes, I think so because a lot of people use their bikes to go to their work and school.

✓ Yes, I think so because a lot of people use their bikes to go to work and to school.

The phrase 'their work and school' is awkward because 'work' and 'school' are institutions/places and after 'go to' it's more natural to repeat the preposition or use no possessive: 'go to work' and 'go to school'. Also 'their' is unnecessary before 'work' and 'school' in this general statement. Suggestion: say 'go to work and to school' or 'go to work and school' for clarity and natural English.