Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve tense accuracy, expand slightly with one specific detail, and use linking language. Start with a clear topic sentence in the past tense, then add a brief supporting detail (where or who with) and a simple reason or feeling. Keep it concise (max 4–5 sentences).

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike that I rode up and down our street every afternoon. I often cycled with my friends to the nearby park, so it was a fun way to exercise and socialise.

제안: Use more natural phrasing and clearer grammar, give one or two specific reasons or examples, and link ideas with a connector. Begin with a direct opinion, then support it with specific evidence (where and why) and a brief consequence or comparison.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in the Philippines. For example, many cities now have bike rental stations and people use bikes for short trips, especially in tourist areas, because they are cheap and convenient.

× Yeah, I do. I bike on our street and I enjoy it a lot.

✓ Yeah, I did. I biked on our street and I enjoyed it a lot.

The question asks about having a bike when the student was a child, which is past time. The student used present tense verbs ('do', 'bike', 'enjoy') that conflict with the past context. Change to past simple ('did', 'biked', 'enjoyed') to match the time frame. Suggestion: when referring to completed past actions, use past simple verbs (subject + past form).

× Yeah, it's popular to our country because when I go to different places here in the Philippines, there are lots of rental bikes that you can ride.

✓ Yeah, it's popular in our country because when I go to different places here in the Philippines, there are lots of rental bikes that you can ride.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect with 'popular'; the correct collocation is 'popular in' to indicate something widely used within a place. Change 'to our country' to 'in our country'. Note: 'it's' refers to 'bikes' singularly; to be clearer, you could say 'They are popular in our country' if referring to bikes explicitly. Suggestion: use 'popular in [place]' or 'popular among [people]'.