Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Correct the grammar and make the answer more natural and slightly more detailed. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add one brief supporting detail. Use linking words if adding more than one detail. Avoid filler words and redundancy.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle when I was about eight years old, and I used to ride it to visit my friends. It helped me learn balance and gave me a lot of freedom to explore my neighborhood.

제안: Give a clear opinion using confident phrasing and support it with specific reasons or examples. Use linking words (for example, because, therefore) and avoid hesitation fillers like “uh.” Keep it within a few sentences and be specific about who or what you mean by "people".

예시: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because most people prefer cars or motorbikes for convenience. For example, busy roads and long commuting distances make cycling impractical for many, so only enthusiasts and children ride bikes regularly.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student used the present simple verb 'have' while referencing a past time 'when I was a child'. This is a tense error; the past tense 'had' should be used to match the past time frame. Suggestion: use past tense verbs when talking about past experiences (e.g., 'I had', 'I lived', 'I played').

× I think it's not, uh, it's not popular.

✓ I don't think so; it's not very popular.

The original mixes a present-tense negation awkwardly ('I think it's not') and is colloquial. Better is 'I don't think so' to express a negative opinion in present tense, followed by a clear statement. Suggestion: use 'I don't think so' or 'I don't think that' plus the clause (e.g., 'I don't think bikes are popular').

× Today's, uh, people don't prefer to use bikes.

✓ Today, people don't prefer to use bikes.

'Today's' is a contraction or possessive form and is incorrectly used to mean 'today'. Use the adverb 'Today' instead. Also 'prefer to use bikes' is grammatical but could be simplified to 'prefer bikes' or 'prefer to use cars instead'. Suggestion: remove the apostrophe and filler words and say 'Today, people don't prefer to use bikes.'