Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is direct and relevant, but it can be improved by removing filler words (e.g., “Uh”), using a more natural phrasing, and adding one specific supporting detail to enrich the response while keeping it under five sentences. Also vary vocabulary slightly (e.g., “mother”→“mum” is fine but consider adding an adjective or brief description). Use a clear topic sentence followed by a linked detail.

예시: Yes — I had a bike as a child. My mum gave it to me for my sixth birthday, and I remember riding it every afternoon around our neighbourhood park. It was bright red and had a bell, which made me feel very proud.

제안: The answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and lacks clarity. Correct subject-verb agreement (“bikes aren’t”), make the contrast clearer with linking words (e.g., “although” / “however”), and provide a specific example or reason why bikes are popular nationally but not in your town (e.g., infrastructure, weather, culture). Keep it concise and structured: topic sentence + brief explanation.

예시: Although bicycles aren’t very common in my town, they are quite popular across the country. Nationally, many people cycle for short commutes because cities have dedicated bike lanes and bike-sharing schemes, but my town lacks safe lanes, so fewer residents use bikes.

× I live in a town in a country where bikes isn't really that popular, but in the country itself it's pretty popular.

✓ I live in a town in a country where bikes aren't really that popular, but in the country itself they're pretty popular.

The subject 'bikes' is plural, so the verb must agree in number. 'Isn't' is the contraction of 'is not' (singular). Use 'aren't' (are not) for plural subjects. Also, to avoid repeating 'the country' awkwardly, you can use the pronoun 'they' to refer back to 'bikes'. Suggestion: use 'bikes aren't' and 'they're' for correct subject-verb agreement and smoother phrasing.