Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be careful with tense consistency and avoid redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then give two or three specific, concise details using linking words. Use correct vocabulary (e.g. 'training wheels' not 'assistant wheels') and limit to about 3–4 sentences to be natural and effective.

예시: Yes, I had several bikes as a child. For example, my first bike had training wheels so I could learn safely, and my second was a small, round-frame bike that I thought was very cute. Now I still have my last bike, which is an adult model and quite stylish.

제안: Good direct answer and relevant example, but make the sentence structure smoother and use linking words for coherence. Avoid repetition (e.g. 'riding their bikes' twice) and add one specific reason or statistic if possible to strengthen your point.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in China. For instance, in many cities you can see people cycling both to work and for leisure, partly because cycling is cheap and convenient for short trips.

× Yes I do. When I was a child I have so many different kinds of bikes.

✓ Yes I did. When I was a child I had so many different kinds of bikes.

The speaker is referring to past time (when I was a child) so present tense 'do' and 'have' are incorrect. Use past simple 'did' and 'had' to match the past timeframe. Suggestion: Keep verbs consistent with the past context (When I was a child + I had...).

× Like my first bike was a bike with assistant wheels and my second bike was a round little one which was very cute and my last one is also my current one.

✓ For example, my first bike had training wheels, my second bike was a small round one which was very cute, and my last one is also my current one.

Word choice and adjective order are incorrect: 'assistant wheels' is wrong; correct term is 'training wheels'. Adjective order 'round little one' is awkward; use 'small round one'. Also sentence is long and needs punctuation/commas and parallel structure. Suggestion: Use correct noun phrases and keep parallel structure for list items.

× It's very fancy and cool. It's an adult bicycle.

✓ It is very fancy and cool. It is an adult bicycle.

This sentence is fine in present tense because it describes the current bicycle. Small change: use full form 'it is' or keep contraction consistently. No tense correction required; included here for clarity and consistency with the previous sentence.

× Yes, I do think bikes are popular in China, and a good illustration is that when you go to any Chinese cities you can always see a lot of people riding their bikes, no matter riding to work or riding their bike for recreation.

✓ Yes, I do think bikes are popular in China, and a good example is that when you go to any Chinese city you can always see a lot of people riding their bikes, whether riding to work or riding their bikes for recreation.

Errors: 'any Chinese cities' should be singular 'any Chinese city' after 'any' and keep number agreement; 'no matter riding to work or riding their bike' is ungrammatical; use 'whether... or...' and keep plural agreement 'their bikes'. Suggestion: Use 'any + singular noun' and parallel 'whether... or...' structure, and keep pronoun-number agreement.