Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a more complete, natural response with a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Use linking words to add coherence and avoid short yes/no answers. Mention who taught you, where you rode, or a memorable moment to make it specific.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was seven, and I used to ride it around the neighborhood every afternoon. Because the area was quiet and there was a small park nearby, I learned to cycle quickly and often rode with my friends on weekends.

제안: Provide a fuller opinion with reasons and examples. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you think so and give a specific example or comparison. Use linking words like 'because', 'for example' or 'however' to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, in cities there are dedicated bike lanes and several bike-sharing schemes, which makes cycling a convenient choice for students and office workers.

× Yeah, I had a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The issue is the use of informal response 'Yeah' which is not a grammar error per se but in formal speaking 'Yes' is more appropriate. This falls under pronoun/registration scope in choices; however the main grammar-corrected form replaces colloquial 'Yeah' with the standard affirmative 'Yes'. Suggestion: use 'Yes' in formal responses to match register of the examiner.

× Yeah, I think that.

✓ Yes, I think so.

The original reply 'Yeah, I think that.' is awkward and incomplete because 'that' needs a complement ('that bikes are popular' etc.). Use 'I think so' to mean 'I agree' or 'I think they are' or complete the clause: 'I think bikes are popular in my country.' Suggestion: either use 'I think so' for a short response or give a full clause: 'I think bikes are popular in my country.' Also replace 'Yeah' with 'Yes' in formal contexts.