Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar (use past tense and articles), expand a bit with one or two supporting details, and keep it natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add a brief detail using a linking word. For example, correct verb form and include when/what type or how you felt. Avoid unnecessary words.

예시: Yes, I did. My dad bought a bicycle for me on my tenth birthday, and I used to ride it around the neighborhood every weekend.

제안: Fix grammar (plural nouns and articles), give a specific reason or example, and use a linking word to connect ideas. Provide a short explanation about why bikes are popular (e.g., convenience, cost, environment) to make the answer more informative and natural.

예시: Yes, I think so. Many people own bicycles because they are cheap and convenient for short trips, so you see them often in cities and near schools.

× Yes, on my birthday my dad buy it for me.

✓ Yes, on my birthday my dad bought it for me.

Grammar problem type ID:5 Past tense issue. The verb 'buy' is in base form but the sentence refers to a past event ('on my birthday'), so the past simple 'bought' is required. Change 'buy' to 'bought'. Also subject-verb agreement in past simple does not add -s; simply use the past form 'bought'.

× Yes, all of my friend. They have a bike.

✓ Yes, all of my friends have a bike.

Grammar problem type ID:1 Singular and plural issue and ID:27 Subject-verb agreement errors. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends' because 'all of' refers to more than one person. With plural subject 'friends', the verb should be 'have' (which is already correct in the original second sentence). Combined into one corrected sentence: 'Yes, all of my friends have a bike.' If you keep two sentences, change the first to 'Yes, all of my friends.' and the second can remain 'They have a bike.'