Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more accurate with tense and grammar, reduce hesitations, and make your answer more concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler sounds like "uh" and repeat words.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I loved riding it every day with a close friend, and we often explored the streets near our school, which made my childhood very enjoyable.

제안: Use correct noun forms and be more precise. Give a clear opinion, then support it with a reason and a specific example. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like "because" or "for example." Remove filler words.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are popular in my country because many families buy them for children as a first means of transport. For example, children often ride to school or to parks on weekends, which makes bikes very common.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the verb should be in the past tense. Use 'had' to match the past time reference.

× When I was child I was in, uh, interested in biking, riding a bike, and every day I went riding a bike with my friend.

✓ When I was a child I was interested in biking and rode my bike with my friend every day.

Several issues: missing article before 'child' (use 'a child'), redundant phrases and awkward verb forms. 'Was interested' is correct past-state; use simple past 'rode' (not 'went riding') to describe habitual past action. Remove filler and streamline for clarity.

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

This sentence is Grammatically correct. 'Bikes' plural matches the general question about prevalence, so no change is needed.

× Yeah, I think bike is popular in every country because it's one of the most important toys that every child, uh, like to have and it's very enjoyable for children.

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are popular in every country because they're one of the most important toys that every child likes to have, and they're very enjoyable for children.

Multiple errors: 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' when speaking generally (singular/plural issue). 'Is' must agree with plural subject ('are'). 'That every child like' requires third person singular 'likes' (subject-verb agreement/third person singular). Use plural pronouns 'they're' to refer to 'bikes.' Also add a comma before 'and' for clarity and remove filler.