Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer direct, grammatically correct, and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes, I did / No, I didn’t), then add one or two specific supporting details. Use correct verb forms and vocabulary (e.g., “learn to ride a bicycle” instead of “writing the bicycle”). Keep it under five sentences and avoid repetition.

예시: Yes, I did. My uncle gave me a bright red bike when I was about seven, and I practiced every day after school to learn to ride without training wheels. By the end of the summer I could ride confidently around the neighborhood with my friends.

제안: Answer directly and support with specific reasons and examples. Use linking words (for example, because, so) to make the idea coherent. Avoid vague phrases like “one of those” and complete your sentence. Keep responses concise and use appropriate vocabulary (e.g., “fitness routines” not “fitness journey” if unsure).

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country at the moment because more people are cycling for exercise and to avoid crowded public transport. For example, many cities have seen increased sales of commuter and mountain bikes, and bike lanes are being used more frequently by commuters and weekend riders.

× I practice every day for me to be good at writing the bicycle.

✓ I practiced every day to become good at riding the bicycle.

The original uses 'practice' present tense while the context is past ('When I was a child'). Change to past tense 'practiced' (Past tense issue as well). 'Writing the bicycle' is incorrect collocation: the correct verb is 'ride' and the gerund form 'riding' is needed after 'good at'. Also rewrite 'for me to be' to the natural infinitive or purpose phrase: 'to become good at'. Suggestion: match tense to the time frame, use the verb 'ride' and the gerund after 'good at'.

× I think bikes are popular in my country, especially these recent months because everyone has been getting in their fitness journey and one of those.

✓ I think bikes have become popular in my country recently because many people have started their fitness journeys, and cycling is one of those activities.

The phrase 'these recent months' and 'has been getting in their fitness journey' is awkward and mixes tenses. Use present perfect 'have become' or 'have started' to show change over recent months. 'Getting in their fitness journey' is incorrect collocation; use 'started their fitness journeys'. 'One of those' is vague; specify 'cycling is one of those activities'. Advice: use present perfect for recent trends and choose natural collocations like 'start a fitness journey' and 'cycling'.