Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is direct but too short and lacks supporting detail. To improve, give a brief topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details (e.g., age when you got it, who gave it to you, what you used it for). Use one linking phrase to connect ideas and keep it within 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was eight — it was a bright red bicycle my parents bought me for my birthday. I used it every day to ride to the park and visit friends, and it helped me become more independent.

제안: Your response shows the idea but is disorganized and contains repetition and grammar errors. Improve by stating your opinion clearly, then give one or two specific reasons or examples, using linking words like "because" or "for example." Keep sentences concise and avoid repeating phrases.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, most of my friends cycle to work or university, and I often see people riding bikes in parks and city streets.

× Yes, of course I had.

✓ Yes, of course I did.

The question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' is in the simple past using the auxiliary did. In responses to did-questions, use did + base form (did/do), not the past form of the main verb alone. Saying 'I had' is understandable but less natural in short answers; 'Yes, I did' is the grammatically correct short response to a did-question. Suggestion: use 'Yes, I did' or 'Yes, I had a bike' if giving a full sentence.

× Yeah, I think so. So the almost, especially my friends, all my friends, especially most of my friends using bicycle, I think.

✓ Yes, I think so. Almost all my friends, especially most of them, use bicycles, I think.

This sentence has multiple structure and word order problems. 'The almost' is incorrect; use 'almost all'. The phrase 'all my friends, especially most of my friends' is redundant; 'almost all my friends' or 'most of my friends' is sufficient. After the subject, the verb must be in correct present simple form 'use' for plural subject 'friends' (subject-verb agreement / present tense). 'Using bicycle' is wrong: we need the base verb 'use' and plural 'bicycles' or the uncountable 'bicycling' depending on meaning. Suggestion: simplify and reorder to 'Almost all my friends use bicycles' or 'Most of my friends ride bicycles'.

× And then other other people I often see.

✓ And then I often see other people riding bicycles.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and repetition ('other other') and is missing the gerund to express the ongoing action. To describe a habitual observation, use present simple with correct word order: subject + verb + object. If you mean you often see other people riding bikes, use 'I often see other people riding bicycles.' Suggestion: avoid repetition and place 'I' before the verb: 'I often see other people riding bicycles.'