Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Shorten repetition, start with a clear topic sentence, and add one specific detail using a linking word. Avoid repeating phrases like “when I was a child.” Keep answer under five sentences and more natural phrasing.

예시: Yes, I had a bike as a child. I often rode it around the local park, and I used to play tag with my friends on our bikes. Those afternoons were very fun because we could ride for hours and explore different paths.

제안: Clarify and correct grammar, remove unfinished fragments, and use linking words to structure reasons. Provide one or two specific examples (e.g., bike-share program name, typical trip). Keep within five sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because the government runs a public bike-share program that lets people ride for the first thirty minutes for free. As a result, many commuters use bikes for short trips, for example, to reach the subway station or go to nearby shops, which is faster than walking and cheaper than taking a taxi.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and I used to bike around the park and play tag with my friends on the bike when I was a child. It was pretty fun memories.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and I used to ride around the park and play tag with my friends on it. They were pretty fun memories.

The sentence contains past-tense content but has two problems: word choice and plural agreement. 'Bike' as a verb is acceptable but 'ride' is more natural for 'ride a bike'; 'on the bike' is repetitive, so replace with 'on it'. 'It was pretty fun memories' mixes singular 'it' with plural 'memories' and incorrect linking verb. Change to 'They were pretty fun memories' to match plural subject and past tense. Suggestion: use consistent past tense verbs and ensure pronouns agree in number with their nouns. Grammar problem type ID:5

× Yes, I think bikes are really popular in my country because they are actually you bike that is set up by the government and people can ride it for thirty minutes for free and it's a really nice way of transportation because it is faster than walking and it's

✓ Yes, I think bikes are really popular in my country because there are public bikes set up by the government that people can ride for thirty minutes for free, and they are a really nice means of transportation because they are faster than walking.

The original sentence misuses the pronoun 'you' where 'public' or 'a public bike system' is intended, causing confusion. Also 'it's a really nice way of transportation' is awkward; use 'a really nice means of transportation' or 'a convenient way to travel'. Pronoun agreement: 'people can ride it' should be 'ride them' if referring to 'bikes' or rephrase to 'people can ride bicycles'. The sentence also ended abruptly; complete the thought. Suggestion: replace incorrect pronoun with the correct noun phrase, ensure pronouns agree in number, and use natural collocations like 'means of transportation'. Grammar problem type ID:12