Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Expand your answer into a short, natural response. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details (where you rode it, who you rode with, or a memorable moment). Keep it concise (no more than 3–5 sentences) and use a linking word for coherence.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that I rode around my neighborhood every afternoon, usually with my older brother. Because our street was quiet, I learned to balance and ride without training wheels within a few weeks.

제안: Make the claim clearer and support it with a concrete reason or example. Use correct phrasing (e.g., "ride a bicycle") and a linking word to connect your point and supporting detail. Avoid unsupported statistics unless you can qualify them as an estimate.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in my city it is common to see people riding to the market or along the bay in the mornings, which shows their practical popularity.

× Yes, because 90% of the Filipinos know how to drive bicycle.

✓ Yes, because 90% of Filipinos know how to ride a bicycle.

The verb phrase 'know how to drive bicycle' is incorrect: 'drive' is used for motor vehicles, while 'ride' is used for bicycles. Also 'bicycle' needs an article 'a' when singular. Additionally, 'the Filipinos' is unnatural in this general statement; use 'Filipinos' without 'the'. Suggested improvement: use 'know how to ride a bicycle' to match native usage and ensure correct verb and article choice.