Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise, use correct tense and prepositions, and avoid irrelevant phrases. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes, I did.), then give one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Correct grammar issues: use past tense consistently (had, used to), use 'on Machad Road' or 'in Machad' correctly, and remove unclear fragments like '80 1'.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child and I often rode it on Machad Road. Also, I used to practise in a nearby park that had a special area for learning to ride bikes and small cars, which helped me gain confidence.

제안: Give a direct answer then support it with specific reasons and correct grammar. Use linking words (because, for example, therefore) and avoid vague phrases like 'some peoples'. Say 'in Nepal' not 'in our Nepal'. Provide at least one concrete reason or example (economy, traffic, culture).

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in Nepal because they are affordable and convenient for navigating crowded streets. For example, many students and delivery workers use motorcycles daily, and their low fuel consumption makes them a practical choice for short trips.

× 'Yes, I have a bike in Machad Road and I used to go in the park.'

✓ 'Yes, I had a bike on Machad Road and I used to go to the park.'

'Have' is present tense but the question asks about childhood (past), so use past tense 'had'. Also use preposition 'on' for a street and 'go to' for going to a place.'

× 'There was a separate park for learning bike and cars, so I used to go there and practice 80 1.'

✓ 'There was a separate park for learning to ride bikes and cars, so I used to go there and practice.'

'For learning bike and cars' is incorrect word order and missing infinitive 'to ride'. Use plural 'bikes' to match general meaning. The fragment '80 1' appears to be a mistake or extraneous and was removed to make a coherent sentence.'

× 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in our Nepal because some peoples are riding for bike and.'

✓ 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in Nepal because some people ride bikes.'

'Our Nepal' is unnatural; use 'Nepal' without 'our'. 'Peoples' is incorrect plural for people; use 'people'. The phrase 'are riding for bike and' is ungrammatical: use simple present 'ride' for habitual actions and repeat 'bikes' or use 'them' if needed. Also remove extra conjunction at the end.'