Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and organize your response: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Remove filler words ("actually", "uh") and correct key vocabulary ("tricycle" not "third Wheeling"). Also keep it to no more than 3–4 sentences. Consider briefly explaining why you couldn't learn or why you stopped using it.

예시: No, I couldn't ride a bike as a child. I had a tricycle when I was very young, but I never learned to ride a two-wheeled bicycle because my parents were busy and I didn’t get proper lessons. As a result, I never developed confidence to try an ordinary bike.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence, then provide two specific reasons with linking words. Fix grammar and word choice (e.g., "food delivery workers" not "food delivery that can anyone work us"). Use linking words like "for example" or "because" to connect ideas and be specific about who uses bikes and why.

예시: Yes, definitely — bicycles are very popular in my country. For example, many teenagers use bikes to travel to school and meet friends, and there are a lot of food-delivery workers who use bicycles because they are cheap and can navigate traffic more easily. Because of these reasons, cycling is common in both cities and smaller towns.

× No, I actually this is embarrassing but I do not know how to ride a bike.

✓ No, actually this is embarrassing, but I do not know how to ride a bike.

The original sentence has awkward word order: 'I actually this is embarrassing' places the subject 'I' before a clause that should stand alone. Reordering to 'No, actually this is embarrassing, but I do not know how to ride a bike.' fixes sentence flow and adds a comma before 'but' to join two independent clauses. Suggestion: place introductory adverb 'actually' before the clause and separate independent clauses with a comma and coordinating conjunction. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Uh, well I had a bike as a child but it was like third Wheeling one and now I never really thought about having an ordinary bike.

✓ Well, I had a bike as a child, but it was kind of a three-wheeled one, and now I never really thought about having an ordinary bike.

Errors include 'like' used colloquially instead of 'kind of' or 'a', incorrect capitalization 'Wheeling', and awkward phrase 'third Wheeling one.' Correct form is 'three-wheeled' as a hyphenated adjective. Also add commas to separate clauses. Suggestion: use proper adjective form 'three-wheeled' and avoid 'like' when giving a description. Grammar problem type ID:13

× Our teenagers nowadays ride a bike a lot and there are also food delivery that can anyone work us and deliver the food or anything with a bicycle.

✓ Teenagers nowadays ride bikes a lot, and there are also food delivery workers who can come to us and deliver food or other items by bicycle.

Multiple errors: 'Our teenagers' is unnecessary possessive—'Teenagers' is fine. 'Ride a bike' should be plural 'ride bikes' to match general plural subject. 'Food delivery that can anyone work us' is ungrammatical: use 'food delivery workers who can come to us.' Also 'deliver the food or anything with a bicycle' is awkward; use 'deliver food or other items by bicycle.' Suggestion: match plural forms for general statements and use 'who' to introduce people (workers) performing actions. Grammar problem type ID:2

× So it's really popular among teenage.

✓ So it's really popular among teenagers.

'Teenage' is an adjective; the correct noun form is 'teenagers' when referring to people. Also 'among' requires a plural noun. Suggestion: use 'teenagers' for the group. Grammar problem type ID:22