Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer just repeated the examiner’s question and did not provide any response. To improve, answer directly with a clear topic sentence (yes/no and brief detail), then add 1–2 short supporting sentences using linking words if needed. Keep responses natural, concise (no more than 5 sentences), and specific—mention age, who gave it, or where you used to ride.

예시: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was six, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood every afternoon. Because it had training wheels at first, I learned to balance slowly and felt very proud when I removed them.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but has multiple problems: mispronounced words (said “bags” and “write”), some grammar errors, repetition and lack of clear linking. To improve, start with a clear topic sentence, then give 2–3 specific reasons using linking words (for example, “because,” “also,” “therefore”), and avoid filler sounds. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., “bikes,” “commute,” “environment”) and finish the thought so sentences are complete.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and practical. For example, many people use them to commute to work or school since they are faster than walking and cheaper than public transport. Also, cycling is good for health and reduces air pollution, so more cities are building bike lanes to encourage riding.

× 'Did you have a bike when you were child?'

✓ 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?'

'Error type: singular/plural with article. The noun child needs the article a when used singular in this context: "were a child." Suggestion: include the indefinite article a before child.'

× 'Yes, bags are very popular in my country because uh, it's very convenient to everybody for everybody to write to everywhere and it's very healthy for it's good for the environment of the earth and the bike is affordable.'

✓ 'Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are very convenient for everybody to get around, they are good for people\'s health, and they are good for the environment. Also, bikes are affordable and not expensive, so almost everyone can get one.'

'Multiple preposition and word-choice errors: "to everybody for everybody to write to everywhere" is ungrammatical. Use "convenient for everybody to get around" to express mobility. "For the environment of the earth" is wordy; use "good for the environment." Also replace pronoun/subject errors (bags -> bikes) and improve cohesion by splitting into clearer clauses. Suggestion: use correct prepositions (for, to) and natural collocations (get around, good for health/environment).'