Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your response repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. In Part 1 you should answer directly with a topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Keep it natural, concise (no more than 5 sentences), and use linking words if you add details. For example, state whether you had a bike, who gave it to you or how you used it, and include a brief reason or memory to enrich the answer.

예시: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was seven, and I used it every day to ride to school and to visit friends. Because I lived near a park, I often practised tricks there, so I became quite confident on two wheels.

제안: This answer is relevant and mostly natural, but could be improved by making the topic sentence clearer, varying vocabulary, and adding one specific example or brief comparison. Use a linking word to connect reason and supporting detail (for example, 'because' or 'for example'). Also avoid slight awkward phrasing like 'the heavy flow traffic' — say 'heavy traffic'.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in city centres because traffic is heavy and buses are often crowded. For example, many commuters use bikes to travel short distances, and there are designated cycle lanes that make cycling safer and faster than driving during rush hour.

× I do think bikes are popular in my country, especially in the town centre due to the heavy flow traffic and buses to get around.

✓ I do think bikes are popular in my country, especially in the town centre due to the heavy flow of traffic and the difficulty of getting around by bus.

The sentence has a preposition and article issue: 'flow traffic' should be 'flow of traffic' (missing preposition 'of'), and 'buses to get around' is unclear and missing an article; it should be rephrased to 'difficulty of getting around by bus' to convey that heavy traffic and buses make travel difficult. Use 'the' before 'difficulty' or 'flow' when specific. Also this keeps the meaning and tense consistent.

× They are designated cycle lanes to make travel easier, especially for those who commute around the city centre.

✓ There are designated cycle lanes to make travel easier, especially for those who commute into or around the city centre.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'They are' to introduce 'designated cycle lanes'; this is a sentence-structure and preposition issue. Use 'There are' (existence construction) to state that the lanes exist. Also add a choice of preposition: 'commute into the city centre' or 'commute around the city centre' depending on meaning. 'They are designated cycle lanes' is not correct without a clear subject; 'There are designated cycle lanes' fixes this.