Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be sure to answer in the past tense and provide a direct topic sentence plus one or two supporting details. Keep it natural and concise, avoid single-word or fragmented replies. Include linking words to make it coherent (e.g., "Yes, I did" or "No, I didn't, but...").

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school because my family lived nearby, and sometimes I borrowed a neighbour's bike on weekends to ride around the park.

제안: Answer the actual question directly, use correct vocabulary ("bikes", not "bags") and clear grammar. Start with a topic sentence (Yes/No/It depends), then add specific reasons or examples using linking words like "because", "for example" or "however". Keep to a maximum of 5 sentences and avoid uncertainty words like "I don't know" without justification.

예시: I think bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially among young people and students because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many university students cycle to campus, whereas older people tend to prefer buses or cars for comfort and safety.

× I don't have a bike.

✓ I didn't have a bike.

The examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense. Using present tense ('don't have') is incorrect for a past-time question. Suggestion: change the verb to past simple ('didn't have') to match the time frame.

× I don't think bags are popular in old people.

✓ I don't think bikes are popular with older people.

The student used the wrong noun ('bags' instead of 'bikes') and an unidiomatic preposition ('in old people'). This is a sentence structure and word choice error. Use the correct topic word 'bikes' and the preposition 'with' for expressing popularity among a group. Also use 'older people' (or 'old people') appropriately. Suggestion: say 'bikes are popular with older people.'

× Maybe in children have a bag, I don't know.

✓ Maybe children have bikes, I don't know.

This sentence has incorrect word order and wrong nouns ('bag' instead of 'bike') and an unnecessary preposition 'in'. It should follow standard English order: subject + verb + object. Use 'Maybe children have bikes' to express possibility, and keep 'I don't know' as a separate clause. Suggestion: 'Maybe children have bikes, I don't know.'