Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar, fluency and add a brief supporting detail. Begin with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, fix the missing article and tense phrasing, and add one or two specific details (when you rode it, who gave it to you, or what you used it for). Keep answers concise (no more than 3–4 short sentences) and use a linking word if adding a reason or example.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a red bicycle my parents bought me for my seventh birthday, and I used it to cycle to the park every afternoon. Because I practiced a lot, I became fairly confident riding on quiet streets.

제안: Be more decisive and correct grammar. Start with a clear opinion, then support it with specific and coherent details. Fix tense and word order (e.g., 'recently' placement) and use linking words like 'however' or 'recently' correctly. Mention who uses bikes, for what purposes (commuting, leisure), and any trends (e.g., increasing bike lanes or decline due to cars). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially among teenagers and people who commute short distances. However, recently their use has declined a bit because more families buy motorbikes and cars, though some cities are promoting cycling by adding bike lanes.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

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