Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is short and natural but too brief. To improve, give a clear topic sentence then add one or two specific supporting details (where you rode it, who you rode with, a memorable incident) using a linking word to make it coherent. Keep it under five sentences and use a bit more varied vocabulary (e.g., “bright pink” or “small pink bicycle”).

예시: Yes, I did — it was a small, bright pink bike that I loved. I rode it all around my neighborhood with my friends, and we would race to the park every afternoon. It was special because my parents bought it for my seventh birthday, so I have a lot of happy memories of learning to ride it.

제안: Your response answers the question and gives a reason, but it can be improved by adding more specific evidence and a linking word to structure the idea (e.g., “for example,” “therefore”). Mention where bikes are popular (cities, rural areas), who uses them (students, commuters), or why (cheap, healthy, traffic). Aim for clearer vocabulary and slightly more variety in sentence structure.

예시: Yes, I do. Bikes are very popular, especially in cities and university towns, because they are cheap and convenient. For example, I often see students and office workers commuting by bike during rush hour, and many streets have dedicated bike lanes now.

× I think bikes are really popular in my country because when I was a child I used to see bikes everywhere in the streets and I still do.

✓ I think bikes are really popular in my country because when I was a child I used to see bikes everywhere in the streets, and I still see them now.

The original sentence uses 'I still do' which is vague because 'do' replaces a verb phrase; in this context it should explicitly repeat the verb 'see' and include the object 'them' for clarity. This is a present tense usage issue: maintain present simple 'see' to match the ongoing situation. Suggestion: replace 'I still do' with 'I still see them now' to be clear and grammatically complete.