Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar and clarity: use past tense consistently, correct possessive and prepositions, and make the answer more concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition.

예시: I didn’t have my own bike as a child, but I often borrowed my cousins’ bikes. We would go cycling together whenever we had free time, especially in the late afternoons, and I enjoyed riding around our neighborhood.

제안: Clarify and organize your reasons with correct grammar and vocabulary. Provide a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words (for example, because / so). Avoid filler words and repetition.

예시: Bicycles are not very popular in the Philippines. This is mainly because many people prefer motorcycles: they are faster and require less physical effort, so they are more convenient for daily commuting.

× Well, I don't have a bike when I was a child, but I usually borrow a bike on my cousins and we do.

✓ Well, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I usually borrowed a bike from my cousins and we did.

The sentence mixes present tense 'don't have' and 'usually borrow' with the past time expression 'when I was a child.' This is a tense consistency error. Use past tense verbs for past time: 'didn't have' (negative past of 'have'), 'usually borrowed' (habit in the past). Also preposition 'on my cousins' is incorrect; use 'from my cousins.' Replace 'we do' with 'we did' to match past tense. Suggestion: Use consistent past tense for events in the past and use correct prepositions (from).

× We do biking every time we have a spare time and a play time, especially during late afternoon.

✓ We went biking whenever we had spare time and playtime, especially in the late afternoon.

There are several issues: 'do biking' is not the most natural verb choice — use 'go biking' or 'went biking.' 'Every time we have a spare time' is ungrammatical; use 'whenever we had spare time.' 'A play time' is unnatural; use 'playtime' without an article. 'During late afternoon' should be 'in the late afternoon.' Also tense should match past context, so use past tense verbs. Suggestion: Use 'went biking' and 'whenever we had spare time' for clear, natural past narration.

× Well in the Philippines bikes are not so popular because we usually prefer using a motorcycle because it it less use a a strength so it much more of using it daily so that it it helps us to our routine.

✓ Well, in the Philippines bikes are not very popular because we usually prefer motorcycles since they require less effort and are more practical for daily use, helping with our routine.

The original contains tense and word choice problems. 'Bikes are not so popular' is acceptable as present, but the rest is ungrammatical: 'prefer using a motorcycle' should be 'prefer motorcycles' or 'prefer using motorcycles.' Repeated words ('it it', 'a a') are errors. Phrase 'less use a a strength' is incorrect — intended meaning is 'require less effort' or 'need less strength.' 'So it much more of using it daily' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'are more practical for daily use.' Maintain present tense for general statements. Suggestion: Simplify and use clear collocations: 'prefer motorcycles' and 'require less effort'.