Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be grammatically correct, concise, and directly answer the question with a past-tense sentence. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then optionally add one brief supporting detail (reason or short example). Use linking words if adding details.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I lived in a small village where most families couldn’t afford bicycles, so I usually walked to school or rode with my older sister.

제안: Give a clear, concise opinion in one sentence, then add one specific reason or example using linking words (for example, 'because' or 'for example'). Avoid hesitation words and repetition; use correct noun forms and smooth linking phrases.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are popular in the Philippines because many people use them for exercise and short commutes. For example, weekend group rides and community races are common in my city, which helps promote cycling culture.

× No, I don't have a bike when I was a kid.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a kid.

The sentence mixes present tense 'don't have' with a past time reference 'when I was a kid'. Use past tense 'didn't have' to match the past time frame. Suggestion: use simple past for actions or states that occurred in the past (e.g., 'I didn't have a bike').

× Uh yeah, I think that bikes here in the Philippines are popular because, uh, bike is part of our sports and it is important oh to have to have a bike to.

✓ Uh yeah, I think that bikes here in the Philippines are popular because biking is one of our sports and it is important to have a bike.

There are several grammar issues here. 'bike is part of our sports' is incorrect: use the gerund 'biking' or 'cycling' to refer to the activity, or say 'the bike is part of our sports' with an article. Also redundant phrase 'to have to have' and trailing 'to' should be removed. The correction uses plural 'bikes' for general popularity and 'biking is one of our sports' to express activity; then simplifies 'it is important to have a bike'. Suggestion: use gerund to name activities, avoid redundant words, and keep clear subject-verb agreement.