Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: - Cấu trúc câu lẫn thì bị lẫn lộn, nhiều từ bị phát âm sai hoặc dùng sai (ví dụ: "buy" thay vì "bike"). - Trả lời nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng ở thì quá khứ (vì câu hỏi là về quá khứ). - Giảm tiếng ngập ngừng (umm, uh), dùng 2–4 câu rõ ràng, có thông tin cụ thể: ai mua, lúc nào, bạn cảm thấy thế nào và vì sao. - Sử dụng từ vựng chính xác liên quan đến xe đạp và cảm xúc (bought, ride to school, excited, proud, freedom).

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mother bought it for me when I started elementary school so I could ride to class. I felt really happy and proud because it gave me more freedom to go out with friends. I used it almost every day until I was a teenager.

제안: - Câu trả lời quá ngắn và thiếu chi tiết cụ thể; lí do đưa ra không chính xác chung chung ("every student must"). - Nên mở rộng với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng và 1–2 câu giải thích/ ví dụ, dùng linking words (for example, because, so) để mạch lạc. - Sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để mô tả mức độ phổ biến và nguyên nhân (common, convenient, affordable, environment, traffic).

예시: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country. Many people, especially students, prefer them because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, in my town most students ride to school and commuters use bikes to avoid heavy traffic.

× Yeah, I do umm, I have a buy when I will try because my mom bought a bike for me to go to school and I uh feel happy because it's.

✓ Yeah, I did. Umm, I had a bike when I was a child because my mom bought one for me to go to school, and I felt happy because of it.

The sentence mixes present and future tenses incorrectly and uses wrong words ('buy' instead of 'bike', 'do' vs 'did'). Use past tense to match the time reference 'when you were a child'. Replace 'buy' with 'bike' and 'do' with 'did'. Also change 'will try' to nothing because it is irrelevant. Use 'one' to avoid repetition and 'felt happy because of it' for natural phrasing.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because every student must go to school by bike and someone, uh, to be uh.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because many students go to school by bike.

The original sentence has unclear fragments and unnecessary modal 'must' implying obligation; use present simple 'go' for habitual action. Remove incoherent filler 'and someone, uh, to be uh'. Use 'many students' rather than 'every student' if unsure; if 'every student' is intended and true, use 'every student goes to school by bike' (subject-verb agreement with third person singular 'goes').