Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammatical accuracy and naturalness. Use past tense for childhood, give a clear topic sentence and a brief supporting detail. Avoid single-word negatives and short answers without elaboration.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn’t afford one, and we lived close to school so I usually walked instead.

제안: Make the answer more fluent and specific. Use linking words to connect reason and examples, correct vocabulary (e.g. 'grab' is wrong here; use 'grab' only if referring to the company or say 'courier'/'delivery services'), and avoid filler words. Provide one or two concrete examples and a short conclusion.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for work. For example, delivery couriers and street vendors often rely on motorbikes and bicycles to reach customers quickly, so bikes remain common, especially in busy cities.

× No, I don't have.

✓ No, I didn't.

The question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' is in the simple past. The student used present tense 'don't have', which is inconsistent. Use the past tense negative 'didn't' plus base verb (do not add past participle). Suggestion: respond to past questions with past forms, e.g., 'No, I didn't.'

× Yes, I guess because bike is also, uh, used for work like crab and other umm, food delivery.

✓ Yes, I guess because bikes are also used for work like Grab and other food delivery services.

The student used the singular 'bike' while referring to bikes in general; use plural 'bikes' and plural verb agreement 'are'. 'Crab' appears to be a misspelling of the ride-hailing company 'Grab' and should be capitalized as a proper noun; also 'other food delivery' needs a noun like 'services'. Suggestion: use plural nouns when speaking about general habits (bikes are), ensure proper names are spelled/capitalized, and include the noun 'services' for clarity.