Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cần sửa ngữ pháp và làm câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn, ngắn gọn và mạch lạc. Ví dụ: dùng thì đúng (parents gave me a bike), tránh tiếng ồ ừ không cần thiết, và thêm một câu chi tiết ngắn gọn để làm phong phú nội dung. Ngoài ra chú ý dùng linking word nếu cần (for example, so, and).

예시: Yes, I did. My parents gave me a bike as a birthday present, and I often rode it to school with my friends. For example, we would race each other on the way and meet at the school gate.

제안: Cần rõ ràng về ý chính và sửa lỗi từ vựng/ ngữ pháp. Tránh lặp âm thanh (umm) và sửa động từ sai (able to ride, not write). Nên đưa một lý do cụ thể và một ví dụ ngắn để chứng minh. Dùng liên từ (because, so, for example) để mạch lạc.

예시: Yes, I believe bikes are very popular. They are an affordable and convenient way for many children to travel to school, and for example in my hometown many families prefer bikes because they are cheap and easy to maintain.

× Well, let me think. MMM yes of course. Uh, when I was a child, my parents was throwing me a bike as a gift and I always used it to commute to school every day with my friends.

✓ Well, let me think. MMM yes of course. Uh, when I was a child, my parents gave me a bike as a gift and I always used it to commute to school every day with my friends.

ID 27 - Subject-verb agreement and verb choice: 'my parents was' is incorrect because the plural subject 'parents' requires the plural verb form 'were' if using 'be', but here a more natural verb is 'gave' (simple past) to express receiving a gift. Also 'was throwing me a bike' is unnatural in this context; 'gave me a bike' correctly uses past tense. Suggestion: use 'gave me' for a past completed action and ensure the verb agrees with plural subject. ID 5 - Past tense issue: the action of receiving a gift happened in the past, so use simple past 'gave'. ID 26 - Sentence structure: keep verbs clear and avoid progressive 'was throwing' for single past events.

× MMM, well, yes, of course. Uh, I think this is because it is a suitable choice for, for almost kids of my country to, uh, to, uh, to able to write to school safe.

✓ MMM, well, yes, of course. Uh, I think this is because it is a suitable choice for almost all kids in my country to ride to school safely.

ID 13 - Word choice and adjective/adverb use: 'almost kids' is incorrect; use 'almost all kids' or 'most kids'. 'of my country' should be 'in my country'. 'to able to write to school safe' contains multiple errors: 'able to' is unnecessary here and 'write' is the wrong verb; the correct verb is 'ride'. 'safe' should be the adverb 'safely' to modify the verb. Suggestion: use 'almost all kids in my country' and 'to ride to school safely'. ID 11 - Incorrect use of prepositions: replace 'of' with 'in'. ID 8/10 - Verb + -ing/present participle: no progressive required; use infinitive 'to ride'.