Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer more natural and grammatically correct by using past tense consistently, a clear topic sentence, and one or two specific supporting details. Keep it concise (max 5 sentences) and use a linking word to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it almost every day and often went on family rides to the park, which was always fun. Because we lived near a quiet lane, I felt safe practicing new tricks and improving my balance.

제안: Provide a clear direct opinion first, then support it with specific reasons and a linking word. Correct phrasing and concise structure will make your answer more natural. Avoid repeating "I'm not sure" and give a brief example or comparison.

예시: I don't think bikes are very popular in Hong Kong. This is because there is limited space and many busy streets, so people prefer public transport. For example, most commuters use the MTR and buses rather than cycling to work.

× I did have a bike when I was a child and I always ride.

✓ I did have a bike when I was a child and I always rode it.

The sentence mixes past reference 'when I was a child' with the present tense 'ride'. Use past tense 'rode' to match the time frame. Also add the object 'it' for clarity. Suggestion: keep verbs in the same time frame and include objects when needed.

× It went to everywhere with my family and it was pretty fun.

✓ We went everywhere by bike with my family, and it was pretty fun.

'Went to everywhere' is incorrect word order and the subject is unclear. Use 'we went everywhere' to show who traveled, and 'by bike' specifies the means. This also corrects word order and makes the sentence natural.

× I'm not sure because in Hong Kong there's less place for the bike.

✓ I'm not sure because in Hong Kong there's less space for bikes.

'Less place' is unidiomatic; use 'less space'. Also 'the bike' is too specific—use the plural 'bikes' for a general statement about bicycle availability. Match noun number to general reference.

× And most of the Hong Kong people, they're very busy, so I'm not sure.

✓ And most people in Hong Kong are very busy, so I'm not sure.

'Most of the Hong Kong people' is awkward; use 'most people in Hong Kong'. Remove the redundant pronoun 'they're' by making a single clause. Also change structure to simple present 'are' for a general truth.