Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Correct basic idea but fix accuracy, clarity and vocabulary. Begin with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (bicycle, taught me, ride), and avoid repetition. Add one or two specific supporting details using a linking word to make the answer coherent. Keep it under five sentences.

예시: Yes, I did. My grandfather taught me how to ride a bicycle when I was about six, and I loved it. For example, every evening after dinner he would push me along the street until I could pedal alone. Because of those lessons, I became confident riding to school and around the neighborhood.

제안: Make the response more natural and specific. Start with a clear topic sentence (plural: bikes are popular), then give specific reasons and use linking words (for example, because, so). Avoid awkward phrases and repetition; use varied vocabulary like commute, convenient, and environmentally friendly.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many people use bicycles to commute to work or school because they are cheap and convenient, and in some cities cycling lanes make it faster than driving.

× My grandfather taught my taught me how to write back and I loved it.

✓ My grandfather taught me how to ride a bike, and I loved it.

The original sentence has repeated words ('taught my taught me') and incorrect verb phrase 'write back' instead of 'ride a bike'. This is a sentence structure and verb choice error. Remove the duplicate words, use the correct verb phrase 'taught me how to ride a bike', and connect the clauses with a comma and 'and' for clarity. Suggestion: proofread to eliminate accidental repetition and ensure the verb matches the intended action.

× I always wrote back.

✓ I always rode my bike afterwards.

'Wrote back' is incorrect in context; the student likely meant continuing to ride after learning. This is an article/verb choice and sentence structure issue. Use 'rode' (past tense of 'ride') and specify 'my bike' or use 'afterwards/after dinner' to show sequence. Suggestion: choose verbs that match the activity (ride, not write) and maintain consistent tense.

× After dinner.

✓ I used to ride my bike after dinner.

'After dinner.' is a sentence fragment lacking a verb. This is a sentence structure error (sentence without a verb). Combine it with a main clause or expand it into a full sentence such as 'I used to ride my bike after dinner.' Suggestion: ensure each sentence contains a subject and a verb.

× Yes, I think it's very popular.

✓ Yes, I think they are very popular.

The pronoun 'it' refers incorrectly to 'bikes' which is plural. This is a subject-pronoun agreement/subject-verb agreement issue. Replace 'it' with 'they' and 'is' with 'are' to match the plural noun 'bikes'. Suggestion: check that pronouns and verbs agree in number with their antecedents.

× We always ride, bike, go to work or go back home every day.

✓ We always ride bikes to work or back home every day.

The original sentence contains awkward commas and an unnecessary separate word 'bike'. This is a verb/structure issue. Use 'ride bikes' as a single verb phrase and streamline the destinations: 'ride bikes to work or back home every day.' Suggestion: avoid unnecessary commas and ensure verb phrases are complete and natural.