Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cümledeki dilbilgisi ve doğallık üzerinde çalışın. "I did have" yerine basit geçmiş "I had" kullanılmalı ve özne-yüklem uyumu için "were" yerine "was" kullanılmalı. Ayrıca kısa, doğrudan bir konu cümlesi verin ve gerekiyorsa 1–2 destekleyici ayrıntı ekleyin. Örneğin, hangi yaşta sürmeyi öğrendiğinizi veya bisikletin sizin için ne ifade ettiğini belirtebilirsiniz. Bağlaçlar kullanarak iki fikir arasında akıcılık sağlayın.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I learned to ride it when I was seven, and I often rode to my friend’s house after school. Because it was lightweight and easy to handle, I felt confident riding on my own.

제안: Daha net ve tam cümlelerle görüşünüzü destekleyin; eksik ve kopuk cümleleri birleştirip nedenleri açıklayın. "People are not paying attention" gibi genel ifadeler yerine kimden, neye dikkat etmediklerini belirtin (ör. sürücüler ya da şehir planlamacıları). Ayrıca bağlaçlarla sebep-sonuç ilişkisi kurun ve somut örnek verin (ör. güvenlik sorunları veya eksik bisiklet yolları). Bu, cevabınızı daha ikna edici ve tutarlı yapacaktır.

예시: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because most people prefer cars for convenience. Moreover, city planners have not built enough safe bike lanes, so many people avoid cycling due to safety concerns. For example, I rarely see commuters cycling to work during rush hour.

× I did have a bike when I were a child.

✓ I did have a bike when I was a child.

The subject 'I' requires the past singular form 'was', not 'were'. Use 'was' for first-person singular in past tense. Suggestion: remember 'I was', 'he/she/it was', and 'we/you/they were'.

× I do not think bikes are popular in my country.

✓ I do not think bikes are popular in my country.

This sentence is grammatically correct in present simple tense and matches the question about general opinion. No change needed.

× Even people are not paying attention.

✓ Even people are not paying attention to them.

The verb phrase 'pay attention' requires a prepositional object introduced by 'to' when indicating what is being paid attention to. Add 'to them' (referring to bikes) to complete the meaning. Suggestion: use 'pay attention to + object'.

× The bike roads.

✓ There are no bike roads.

This fragment lacks a verb and does not form a complete sentence. Using 'There are no bike roads' employs 'there be' to state existence and matches the negative idea implied. Suggestion: form complete sentences with a subject and verb, or use 'There is/are' to indicate presence or absence.