Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains a repetition (“I I”) and a contradiction between ‘bike’ and ‘bicycle’ that makes your meaning unclear. Give a direct topic sentence that clearly answers the question, then add one brief supporting detail. Keep it under five sentences and avoid repetition. Use linking words if you add reasons or examples.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I had a small balance bicycle that helped me learn to ride, and I often practiced in the courtyard near my house. Because of that early practice, I learned to ride confidently by the time I was five.

제안: The answer is unclear and contains incorrect words (“bank” likely meant ‘bike’) and vague statements. Start with a clear opinion (yes/no or they are quite popular), then give specific supporting details and use linking words (for example, because, however, moreover). Mention who uses bikes, for what purposes, and where they are common to make the response specific and coherent.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are fairly popular in Nepal because many people use them for short trips and commuting in towns. For example, students and shopkeepers often ride motorcycles or bicycles to save time and money, especially in congested areas where parking a car is difficult.

× No, I did not have a bike, but I I did have a bicycle.

✓ No, I did not have a bike, but I did have a bicycle.

This sentence contains a repeated word 'I' creating a sentence structure error (Grammar Problem Type ID 26). Remove the extra 'I' to make the sentence grammatically correct: 'No, I did not have a bike, but I did have a bicycle.' The tense (past simple) is appropriate because the examiner asked about childhood.

× Well, in Nepal everybody has a bank in the past.

✓ Well, in Nepal, many people had bikes in the past.

The original uses 'bank' which is an incorrect word choice and also mixes present tense 'has' with 'in the past', causing a tense and sentence structure error (Grammar Problem Type ID 26). Replace 'bank' with the intended noun 'bikes' and match the tense to 'in the past' by using past simple 'had'. Also add a comma after 'Well' for natural speech.

× It is easy to cover and comfortable.

✓ They are easy to use and comfortable.

'It is easy to cover' is an incorrect collocation and singular/plural mismatch with 'bikes'; this is a sentence structure and word choice error (Grammar Problem Type ID 26). Use 'They' to refer to 'bikes' and a correct verb phrase 'easy to use' to express usability. The adjective 'comfortable' correctly describes bikes, so keep it but ensure subject-verb agreement: 'They are easy to use and comfortable.'