Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答要更直接且用完整句子说明事实，然后用一到两句补充细节或原因。注意不要用口语化的“Good job!”作为回答开头，句子应自然、连贯且不冗长（最多五句）。可加入时间、频率或原因等具体信息，并使用连接词如“but”或“because”。

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but I rarely rode it. I preferred staying indoors and playing computer games, so I only used the bike occasionally to go to my friend’s house. As a result, I didn’t become very confident at cycling.

제안: 回答要语法正确并更具体地说明观点和原因。用完整句子并使用连接词（for example, however, because）来组织信息。可以比较不同时间段的变化，并给出具体例子或数据来支撑观点，保持不超过五句。

예시: I think bikes were more popular about ten years ago, but their popularity has declined recently. Many people now prefer cars and public transport, and younger people often choose computer games over outdoor activities. For example, when I was young, most kids rode bikes to school, but now fewer do so because of safety concerns and busy schedules.

× Yes, 10 years ago is popular, but when I try I like to play computer game more than drive bike.

✓ Yes, bikes were popular 10 years ago, but when I tried them I liked playing computer games more than riding a bike.

句子包含多个时态和动词形式错误： 1) “10 years ago is popular” 时态不一致，描述过去应使用过去时，改为 “were popular”。 2) “when I try” 应为过去时 “when I tried”，因为谈论过去的情况。 3) “I like to play computer game more than drive bike” 中动词形式与并列不一致，应使用动名词或不定式保持一致，并注意名词复数与冠词：将 “play computer game” 改为 “playing computer games”，将 “drive bike” 改为 “riding a bike”。 建议： - 讲过去的事情时整体使用过去时，注意句子中所有相关动词保持相同时间框架。 - 并列动词时保持形式一致（例如都用动名词 -ing 或都用不定式）。 - 注意可数名词的单复数与冠词的使用，例如 “computer games” 或 “a bike”。 - 可读作："Yes, bikes were popular 10 years ago, but when I tried them I liked playing computer games more than riding a bike."