Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly but use correct tense and add one or two specific details to make it natural and informative. Correct the tense to past and avoid single-word replies. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add a brief supporting detail using a linking word (e.g. "because" or "and").

예시: Yes, I did. I had a bright red bicycle when I was about eight years old, and I used to ride it to school and around the neighborhood almost every day.

제안: Provide a clear, grammatically correct opinion sentence and follow with specific supporting details. Fix vocabulary/grammar errors ("by" → "bikes"; "many children on own children have bike" → "many children own bikes"). Use a linking phrase (e.g. "for example" or "because") to make the answer coherent and concise (no more than 3–4 sentences).

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient. For example, in my hometown many children and adults own bikes and use them to commute to school or markets.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' is in the past simple. The student's reply uses the present simple 'have', which is a tense mismatch. Use past simple 'did' to match the question's past context. Suggestion: use past-tense responses to past-tense questions (e.g., 'Yes, I did').

× Personally, I think by is very popular in my country.

✓ Personally, I think bikes are very popular in my country.

The student intended to refer to 'bikes' but wrote 'by' (typo) and used singular with 'is' which mismatches plural subject. The sentence also needs present simple 'think' + plural subject 'bikes' with 'are' to express general fact. Suggestion: correct the noun to 'bikes' and use 'are' for plural subjects in present simple statements.

× In my in my hometown many children on own children have bike.

✓ In my hometown, many children have their own bikes.

This sentence has repetition ('In my in my'), incorrect word order ('on own'), missing possessive determiner, and singular 'bike' where plural is required. The corrected sentence fixes repetition, places possessive 'their' before 'own', and uses plural 'bikes' to agree with 'many children'. Suggestion: remove repetitions, use correct possessive determiners, and ensure noun number matches quantifier ('many').