Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Correct grammar and make the response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then optionally add a brief reason or detail using a linking word. For example, use the past tense and the phrase “used to” correctly: “I didn’t use to have a bike.” If you add detail, use linking words like “because” or “so” and keep it to one short supporting sentence.

예시: I didn’t use to have a bike when I was a child because my family lived in a small apartment and there wasn’t enough space to keep one.

제안: Make your answer clearer and more natural by using concise sentences, correct comparative forms, and fewer repetitions. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then add two specific supported reasons using linking words like “because” or “also.” Avoid redundant phrases (“such like such as”) and incorrect comparative forms (“more faster”).

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. They are cheaper and often faster than cars in crowded cities because they can weave through traffic, and they also save time and money on parking.

× No, I don't use to have a bike in my childhood.

✓ No, I didn't use to have a bike in my childhood.

The student is referring to a past habitual situation. The correct form is 'didn't use to' (past tense with base verb) or 'didn't used to' is common but prescriptive grammar uses 'use' after 'did'. The original 'don't use to' mixes present negative with past time frame 'in my childhood', causing a tense mismatch. Suggestion: use 'didn't use to' for past habits or 'I didn't have a bike when I was a child.'

× Yes, according to my perspective, bikes are more popular in my country because it is the fastest and cheaper way to travel as well as it saves you from a lot of situations such like such as parking problems and it is much more faster than bulky car.

✓ Yes, in my opinion, bikes are very popular in my country because they are one of the fastest and cheapest ways to travel; they also save you from many problems such as parking, and they are much faster than bulky cars.

Multiple issues: 'according to my perspective' is awkward; 'in my opinion' is natural. 'Bikes ... are more popular' needs a comparison target—use 'very popular' or 'one of the most popular'. 'it is the fastest and cheaper way' has pronoun and adjective form errors: use plural 'they' for bikes, and parallel comparative forms 'fastest and cheapest' or 'one of the fastest and cheapest ways.' 'cheaper' should match 'fastest'—use 'cheapest' or rephrase. 'saves you from a lot of situations such like such as' is redundant and misuses prepositions; use 'many problems such as parking'. 'much more faster' is incorrect: 'more' + comparative is redundant; use 'much faster' or 'far faster'. 'bulky car' should be plural 'bulky cars' or 'a bulky car' with article. Suggestion: simplify sentences, ensure pronoun number agreement, use correct comparative/superlative forms, and remove redundant words like 'such like'.