Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your response is off-topic and does not answer the question. For Part 1 you should give a short, direct answer (1–2 sentences) that states whether you had a bike and then add one clear, relevant detail. Use simple, natural vocabulary and avoid unrelated word lists. Keep your answer under five sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I used to ride it to the park every weekend with my friends.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors, unclear phrases and some vocabulary mistakes (e.g. “by skull”, “better to write”, “good for a weather”). Improve by using a clear topic sentence, one or two supporting details, and linking words. Make sentences grammatically correct and be more specific (e.g. who rides, why, where). Keep it concise (max 5 sentences).

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people, from young children to adults, use bicycles because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. In addition, cycling is common in cities with good weather and flat roads, so many people prefer it for commuting and exercise.

× Support in advance means patronage, unclear, nebulous, weakening, diluting, doubtful, skeptical, aggressive.

✓ Support in advance means patronage; it can be unclear, nebulous, weakening, diluting, or cause doubt and skepticism.

This sentence is a run-on list with inconsistent word types and unclear relationships. The error fits 'Sentence structure errors' because items are mixed (adjectives, verbs, nouns) and punctuation is missing. Improve by splitting into clauses, using a semicolon or period to separate the definition from the list, and use parallel forms (e.g., either a list of adjectives or phrases). Also replace 'doubtful, skeptical, aggressive' with 'cause doubt and skepticism' because 'aggressive' does not fit the semantic pattern.

× Yes, I think it is very popular.

✓ Yes, I think they are very popular.

The pronoun 'it' incorrectly refers to 'bikes' which is plural. This is a subject-verb agreement / pronoun reference error. Use 'they' with the plural noun and 'are' as the correct plural verb form.

× Most of the people ride bikes in my country from five, six year child up to adult, they all ride by skull it is cheaper and better to write and it is good for a weather

✓ Most people in my country ride bikes from about five or six years old up to adulthood. They all ride because it is cheaper, better for travel, and good for the weather.

Multiple plural and number errors: 'Most of the people' is better as 'Most people'; 'five, six year child' is incorrect; use 'five or six years old' to describe age; 'up to adult' should be 'up to adulthood'. 'Ride by skull' is incorrect and likely a pronunciation or word error; replace with 'ride because'. 'Better to write' is incorrect word choice; use 'better for travel' or 'better for getting around'. 'A weather' is incorrect article use; 'the weather' or just 'good for the weather' depending on meaning. The sentence was also a run-on; split into two sentences and fix plural forms and articles.